The New Equipment in classes By : Dana

Name : R.Surahutomo Aziz Pradana (Dana)
Class : 1 D3 IT B
Topic : Essay of "The New Equipment in classes"


The New Equipment in classes

Firstly, did you know what is equipment ? equipment is a tool that has a certain function to do a certain job, so what about classes ? well, classes is a place where some people gather together to reach a goal.
so in this task, i'd like to tell you if this is about a new tool for developing a better classes around us.

The first step in this task is that we have to analyze first what the right equipment to be applied, so the question is, " is the new equipment appropriate to the goals you have set for the course?" But, a considerations when using an existing equipment is really another thing that is really important to do, because we will know the conclusion from it like strength and weakness from the process we did.

After analyzing the equipment, the second thing is the quantity of the equipment, the number of equipments in a class must be balanced enough with the number of students in a class, this consideration is a must, so we will have an effective process to reach our goal widely.

Then, it is about a workspace, the main question is "is there any sufficient workspace around the equipment?"
if not, this will be a problem because the process will be limited and not as effective as usual.

But how about the durability of the equipment itself ? is it working well?
this is really a vital point in a class because if it is broken, the process in a class will be nothing.

Then, Will the new equipment enhance students’ understanding ? if no, then we have to upgrade it and make a better system for a better understanding in a class, but, if yes then we already got the point and we have to keep the strength that we got and try to improve it as we can.

Next, it is about the source, is there any source of funds to cover its purchase ? this is really an important point to increase the effectiveness of our system in a class, because if we got an uncounted students or the equipments itself that is needed in a class, the fund is something that we have to press it as minimum as possible, so we can stabiize the uncounted students or the equipment.

But how about a broken equipment ? we have to make a clear arrangements to report the broken equipment and fix it as soon as possible so the process of teaching and learning will not be stopped,  in other way, we have to make a clear procedure on each equipment so the broken or misunderstanding of using the equipment will be reduced to as minimum as possible, in addition we have to announce the procedure if it is needed especially for a complicated equipment to be used, and to avoid a broken equipment at a crucial times for a better arrangement,
we have to prepare a backup equipment on each class at least 10% of the maximum stock of the equipments. so we can change the broken one with the backup immediately.

Well that's all about the essay of "The new equipment in classes", i'm sorry if i got mistaken or something like that, i hope it is useful.

Thank You.

Review :
- The question "did you know?" or similar questions might be good to be used in an article, but in an Essay the question is unecessary, it might be better to just write the definition right away!
- Try to avoid repetition of the same word in one sentence, for example the first sentence of second paragraph.
- I might have include this in the previous point, but this one is quiet important. Avoid repetition of the word "The". It used to refer something that has been mentioned before, so if it hasn't been mentioned, use "a/an" instead.
- Avoid the word "thing", it shows that you don't know what to say or write.
- Mostly I agree with this Essay, before conducting a repair or buying a new equipment, we need to analyse what will we buy or fix.