Essay about New Learning Instrument For Classes by : Basith Asyari

In this life, all come from a simplicity. Then, technology changes the simplicity into something which is very useful in all aspects of human life.Originally technology is only to help a man in fulfilling their needs, but as the development of it, there was a transfer of technology functions.

In education aspect,the technology always in changing everytime.Intending to improve the softskills and hardskills quality of students in the schools.Example for the writeboard,the materials was changing from sabak stone,black board that’s can be written by chalk then until now using whiteboard that can be written by boardmarker pen. I also see the development of the equipment in the classes like at the chair, table, attendance listing, personal cupboard,adding LCD projector for presentation method by using computer and the style of the school building itself are always updating following the era.

I have many idea about the new learning instrument for classes to improve the quality of the students in the classes.But it’s need little bit expensive in price because, the learning instrument technology was updated. I imagine if PENS has the technology,the student’s quality was improved in maximality and I think in Indonesia,the technology still not available and no one yet to using it.

The first technology I called “auto attending ins”.The ways of working of the instrument by using detector,like smart card.But I think it more simple and effective.It’s work when the teacher entering into classroom,that’s instrument autodetecting the teacher and the students on the classroom the autolisting the attendance list.The instrument detecting the teacher and the students by detecting the chip in the smartcard using sensoring technology that sensoring to all sides in the classroom. Because the smartcard detector  in PENS sometimes not detecting the teacher’s smartcard to open the class’s attending list.So, if it’s occurring like that,We must using manual attending list with paper class list,then, it must confirmed to BAAK to fill the attending list in online system and it’s not effective. And sometimes too it’s not listed properly nor not listed in online attendance system.  

The second technology I called “auto our feel ins”.The instrument is for improving the works of the Air conditioner in the classroom and the instrument is for fixing the using of air conditioner’s timer.That’s I think not too effective in works.Because, the timer works during the the time not the condition of the class.Hot or cold is not for the reference.So if the students in the classroom feeling chilled,the air conditioner still on. And its very disturbing and reducing focus the students in the classroom.The auto our feel ins in work following the temperature detector.So if in the classroom the temperature was very hot, the instrument will work and commanding the air conditioner to turn on and the temperature in the air conditioner be setted to the certain temperature.In example in classroom was 38 degress celcius,feels very hot to study.So,the temperature in the Air conditioner would be setted to maybe 18 degrees celcius to equalize the room’s temperature and  get comfortable room temperature and cool to study.

   The last technology for my essay I have an idea to using a solar cell for electricity needed in every room,Because it low in cost,more environmental friendly and effective utilize electricity sources in than we always using electricity from PLN.If the voltage,power or in current electricity still too small to run the big machine in laboratory,we can add more solar cell or maybe combine with electricity from PLN

In PENS, I think many of the classes equipment have been completed.But, I still have few recommendation to add some equipment in the classroom like,LCD screen beside the writeboard,dump in every classes that placed in front of classes,good and fix LCD in some classes that still have no LCD or the LCD were broken,chalk or boardmarker stock in every classroom and broom and dust pan every classes.so if the classroom was dirty, we can cleaning on it before we use it for studying.

That’s all of my essay about the new equipment for classes.I’m sorry if in my essay there’s still many false in grammar,tenses or maybe in the meaning and word typing.

Review : 

- Okay... I must admit this one is good, but.... Next time, please put your Identity on the mail and also a Tittle for the Essay.
- Paragraph two, First Sentence. The word "in" should be deleted, it's already good with "always changing"
- Inapropiate use of past continous tense at Paragraph two, Second Sentence. The word will be nicer to use a simple past tense. "The materials changed from"
- Watch out with the use of 's after a word. it could make the word "that" into "that is"
- Paragraph Three, Second Sentence. The use of "has been updated" will be better because you are using passive voice after the because's coma.
- Paragraph Three, Third Sentence. The use of "will be" will be better because you are using the word "if" before.

- Other than some minor mistake, this Essay is good. And... yes those mentioned here are expensive, but using solar cell will be troublesome, isn't it? it needs sorching heat to fuel a room's electricity and if we put it in every room... well... the entire campus might turn into a giant grilling zone.