Sunday, November 15, 2015

The new equipment for classes by Cicik Nofindarwati

The new equipment for classes

There are so many things that are needed in the learning process, one of which was a classroom. Without the classroom learning process will not run smoothly. If running, there will be a sense of discomfort. Therefore, the condition of classrooms that comfortably supports the passage of the learning process. But the conditions are comfortable classes like? Classes are comfortable is where the condition of the class clean, besides all the equipment class that supports the course of the learning process to function properly. 

Talking about class equipment, what is the equipment must be present in the class? So many an equipment required in a class in the conduct learning activities. Such as tables and benches and slates are things that must exist in the learning activities. Then in this PENS whether the equipment has fulfilled its class for learning activities? If there is not still quite or nothing to be repaired what the hell? I think class equipment provided by the PENS very adequate to support the course of the learning process. But it is unfortunate that there are several classes of equipment not working so that it can interfere with the learning process. 

One example that I often encounter is malfunctioning air conditioner (AC), therefore for the sake of convenience and it helps smooth learning activities immediately corrected, because otherwise the conditions in the classroom will be very hot, especially if during the day. Indeed, there are ways to overcome this can be done by opening a window or door to air ventilation but still air that enters through the window is not too cold so the conditions in the room remained hot and stuffy. If the door is opened, the bustling sounds of the outside also interfere concentration in learning activities. For another example is the LCD projector malfunction. Now this is a very rare model of  learning using the blackboard, which is common to use a power point that contain material then displayed via an LCD projector. So what if the LCD projector is not working? the result is a learning activity was disrupted, learning time that should be maximized to be reduced due to borrowing cut off with the LCD, not to mention if classrooms are used away from the BAK. Therefore it is better to fix it or if it is damaged can be replaced with new ones. 

Another thing to must interest is the board, although in the learning activities are not too use the blackboard, but it would be nice if the whiteboard is used in the learning activities. Although a little expensive because of the use of markers, but I think it's better maintain the cleanliness of the dust generated when we use the blackboard using chalk. And I think the last thing to note is the student bench, a bench that was not suitable to be used it is better replaced with new ones. So it can be concluded that the actual equipment PENS classes provided for the learning activities are complete, but it would be nice if that can’t be used should be repaired or replaced with new ones.

Name               : Cicik Nofindarwati
Class / NRP     : 1 D4 Teknik Komputer B / 2210151038
Division           : Speech

Review : 
- First and foremost, It's a wall of text. Yes, before I edit it there's just a wall here, but I split it into four paragraph to make it far easier to read.
- You should learn about the order of words. I noticed that some of the writings will be improved if you used the correct order, for example at the first paragraph "Classes are comfortable is" can be changed into "Comfortable classes are conditions where the class is clean".
- Try to use conjunction words, those conjunctions will help you to connect two sentences into one.
- I also noticed that some of the questions are out of places. It might be better to just state them instead of asking first, especially in an Essay.
- Try to avoid the word "thing", use instruments, steps or other actual word to avoid ambiguity.

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